Critique for DeadRabbit 'A Good Night for Hunting' was a great piece. The imagery was really powerful and as I was unfamiliar with your character Mir; I liked the ambiguity of whether he was a vampire or a shapeshifter. His animalistic nature really showed with your choice of words describing his ragged breaths as "panting". I also liked the fact you stayed with some of the original vampire myths in creating the scene for your character. The affinity for the wolves and the decimation of all those people.Critique for DeadRabbit by JadeHades
'The Last Lion' was a very interesting story but obviously unfinished. I could tell there was back-story missing and some kind of tension between the two characters you introduced. In the middle/ end of the story I could tell you were in a bit of a hurry to finish as you repeated yourself a few times. The sun was already setting and you d
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